Poem said to be from ibn taymiya

[ibn Kamal]

al Salaamu alaykum wa rahmatullah

I made my first video and i want to read your opinions:

http://www.sendspace.com/file/3ig60h
http://rapidshare.com/files/46208489/qasida_fertig.mpg.html
http://www.fileflyer.com/view/GpAq5Bn

I know that sometimes the text is not the same, the munshid sings, but it is for some reasons that some words needed to be changed, because there are some different versions of the poem, with some of them containing islamicly wrong things, like to say the quraan is qadim... Anyway, how is it?

[MosDef]

Bro i just downloaded it and i was impressed. You should defo continue and upload them on youtube so we can embed rather than download.

Masha'Allah good work.

The white Arabic on a black background is always effective.